Thursday 8 July 2010

a drabble to begin

-Child, don't you dare look at me like that!
-Father, you should know by now that we don't stop.
-Child, I warn you. Daughter or no daughter, I'll have your blood.
-Come on and try.
The body was found later that week, blood everywhere. He was a
man in his early 30s. The location of the wounds would suggest he
was killed by a small person with a knife.
The apparent size of such person is consistent with the 4 year
old missing daughter.

4 comments:

  1. Now I'm afraid of angry small children. Are they safer when they're tweens?

    I like this. Keep up this awesome writing. It totally took me by surprise when I first read it and on a second reading, it's still awesome.

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  2. This was... scary. Which makes it good. Simple, to-the-point and it leaves you with all facts but no real meaning - you have to figure it all out yourself... GREAT job! :)

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  3. Very Twilight Zone. The 'we don't stop' comment makes me picture little zombie kids with red staring eyes.

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  4. Have you been watching "The Brood?"

    Kids these days...

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